Pretty good!
For a first animation, this is pretty good! Not one of those crappuy first animation that're all too common here. Keep up the good work! You've been making flashes before this one, whether they were submitted or not. That's good, to practice!
Idea = Good
Presentation = Bad.
Improve the graphics and presentation of the flash and redo the idea then resubmit it and it might stay in the portal because overall the idea was pretty funny just poorly executed.
Good Job
That was really good for a first try!