Not bad.
I loved the music. The animation could be slightly better. I'm sure you can improve.
Reviews for "Zarbog"
Gryph responds:
cool, i'll let Evil-Dog know that he's doing a fine job, and i'll keep trying :D
decent
not the best with graphics or animation, but it was still fun. i liked the music. the robot looked a lot like jonny5 from short circuit
Gryph responds:
short circuit rox core soft warez: "We Locos kick your a$$, we Locos kick your face, we Locos kick your balls into Out-er-Spaaaace" LOL .. hahha, thanks for the comment
Well then,
There are some major issues with this movie. The biggest is how your animation doesn't go with the background at all. It would work if the animations were not supposed to be funny(Which they weren't) or if the backgrounds were not as serious. You have this dark intro background of a guy sitting and it looked really good. Then some ridiculous robot comes on the scene that doesn't fit at all. Then at the end you have a ridiculous moral to a very inconsistent flash. The music and the backgrounds go well together but your animations just ruined the whole thing. Sorry, I don't want to be a jerk but this wasn't very good. It would be nice if you redid this and changed the story and got rid of the bad animations. Then resubmit it and see how it does. It was good until the robot came in. The art reminds me of brokensaints stuff. I just want to say good luck with the rest of your flash works in the future.
Gryph responds:
the animation doesn't fit with the background because they're cell shaded bitmap traces of reality whereas everything else was purely telling the story the way i wanted to tell it {and no the animation was not meant to be funny; this was a very serious altercation in which one intedimentsional teddy bear lost it's ability to re-visit this realm} - t'is a madness that drives us and a passion that consumes ... plus actually writing with a story in mind might help too :D , in closing: it isn't hard to follow a theme, but it is hard to forge order from chaos -- thanks for your honesty, maybe next time my mic will work :p
Ahahahahaha you got me
I first watched and I was like "ooohooho" because it was pretty. You did a good job of disguising this crappy flash.
Gryph responds:
righteous, one step closer to ... oh wait, you didn't like it - nice to see the human conditioned hatred is mutual ... No this isn't a personal attack, nor is it sulking: Criticism rules, you merely throw gasoline on the inferno; thank you, i appreciate your honesty