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Reviews for "MC: Without a Plot"

this was good man... dont put urself down!

I really enjoyed the "i need to find a plot.... plot" hahha... i dont think u should put ur work down so much. ur animation was very well done and the soudn coulda been a lil better but htats about it. and id give u a plot.. but i dont make flash at all so i really dont know what i could tell you haha. I really hope to see more from you with some form of plot. I like how they didnt have arms sometimes that made them kinda unique in a way. well this is long enough.. Keep it up and i hope to hear a reply from you!!!!:P

~Chloe~

Masso responds:

Thanks!
I will do more!
I should put a plot for my next toon...
I'll think of something!

LOL

ME LIKE! ME LIKE! Keep up the good work. You rock

Masso responds:

lol
Thanks!

lol

ya, that was kool man

Masso responds:

Thanks!
Glad you like it!

Hey Man

i know your a begginer , dont put your self down , it was a good flash yup :) , what you need to to is plan on paper what your aims are , sort of like a script , that way you dont get side tracked at the end , sounds could do with a bit of sharpining up , again your a begginer , to have the patience to make that and subbmit it man you must be determined , hope to see your future flash's , keep up the good work :P

Masso responds:

Thanks!
I will!

Not bad.. In fact I liked it!

It looks good, the drawings are nice, but it would be better if you had some transitioning animation, instead of just switching scenes and having them in different locations. If you can make smooth animated transitions, maybe even fbf(frame by frame) transitions, this could be front page material (if you got some more 'plot' in the search for a plot =P) overall, keep up the good work... remeber, hard work pays off =D

Masso responds:

Ya, hard work does!
I'll take note of this.
THANKS!!!