Good idea, Good drawing... Bad story
Come on dude! You just got the greatest idea for a side story and all I get is this??? I don't like the "skining part" The original just was like that and you should explain why he has a huge head or som stuff like that...
sigh...
I'm going through and voting on February submissions right now, and how I wish this was actually an original idea so I could put it on my top five... but alas, it is not. Sorry man.
You´ll never match David´s work
1.- It wasnt scary, it was sad and funny, i mean, you know, pathetic
2.- Your story has an order, and makes sense, just like any cartoon. David´s art doesnt, and that makes his work so amazing.
3.- The dog part was funny, you´ve got some ideas. work on them, and stop the copycat thing
what a rip off
I give you a zero for your inability to use an orginal idea. Too many people think we'll accept flash cloned from some other kick ass animator. But it's just not going to happen. Put yer foot down people and stop the god damn Firth cloning!
dumb....
wtf? pretty funny