well.
lets start with the good. the animation/drawings (of the people anyway) were solid, granted they didnt have to do much.
other that that it was sh*t. i understand that it was an incomplete thing, but honestly, dont put something this bad on newgrounds. yes there is worse, but this is pretty bad. The voices are horrendus, it sounds like whoever did all the voices, surely it was the same person, presumably you, was talking into a bad microphone 2 inches from your face.
and last but not least, could you have chosen a worse subject matter? DBZ and You-Gay-O, honestly. Aside from that, the plot and....jokes...were absolutly gay. i really hope you were 12 when you made this.
so lets grow up, throw away those dbz action figures, and try for some good, finished work next time.