Great job here!
A couple things to fix though. I only gave you a 6 in graphics because it was so hard to see the black stick in some of the dark scenes. He blended in the background to much. Other than that your graphics were great. I love how you gave them emotions. I've never seen a stick animation where they had true emotions. Great job there. I can't believe she was killed. I thought he would be able to save her but he couldn't. A nice twist in the movie, although its sad. Your grammar wasn't as bad as you thought it was. Overall nice job and I would like to see more. Good luck in your future movies.