Dude.
Dont copy. You traced the part when you see him from the front. Its traced from this anime. I actually thought that was a really nice part, but seems like you can't make your own stuff...
Reviews for "Flair 5"
omfg
i dont agree with "greensuckbluerules" Fla!r is tha best!
this is the best series ever! so those dudes who think it sux dont have a life! i say! just look at it! music fits all scenes! cool action and so on! WTF is it thats wrong with it! NOTHING!!
so you got a vote 5 and overal 10!
/ThaEvil [EvilLock]
Very Good Movie but...
The plot has no sense.We don't know why flair+the blue stick are fighting and who the pink bitch is.It seems that the whole plot was skewered together in a spin doctored fasion(The main char. loses his bitch then wins.Regular low budget action movie stereotype)
Really sophisticated for a stick movie.
The rain looked awesome, with splashes everywhere (although it was kind of shit how it stopped suddenly, then started again). The plot, though simplistic, was far more involved than I was expecting.
The dialogue was nice and in a way the lack of spoken English gave it a nice tone.
But why sticks? The girl had a proper human head with hair and everything, and it looked almost macabre, that head on a stick body. I couldn't help but think how much more awesome it would have been had you taken the plunge and gone over the sticks with fully fledged characters. Not /that/ much more work, but an awful lot more pleasing to the eye.
Still it was great.
Some slightly predictable/cheesy bits like the whole way the fight overturned, but I liked the unexpected loss. It seemed slightly more mature than a typical low-budget action flick.
If you want help with proof-reading, e-mail me.
Best of luck with your next project. I hope you take the plunge and go for real characters!
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Minha Nossa!!! Essa sua animação ficou perfeita!!Eu acompanho seu progresso desde a sua primeira animação, e sem dúvida houve um progresso incrível!!! E eu acho que a sua animação não mereceu o prêmio de "Daily 5th Place".......Ela deveria ter ganhado o prêmio de "Daily 1st Place".
Continue com esse seu ótimo trabalho!!
_LUAN_CANDIDO_