HEY!
This song is great! MH16, you're very good at this. Just listened to a whole bunch of your entries and even if I can't say I like every single one, I can see you've been getting better and better. Keep up the good work! Everyone says you're making songs really fast, and I agree. It's obvious you're into making music. So keepdoing it, then you will get even better. (But don't neglect schoolwork... :-D)