Not bad
It looks like it was drawn pretty well, and you did some nice shadowing. I'm giving you a 9 for sound because it's actual voices, reading text gets really annoying. It's pretty gay that most of the whole flash is a phone call though, I'd try to be a bit more creative in the future. At least you had a decent storyline to a point. The funniest part was probably the "come in!" part, lol. Good job overall.