there we go;
#1
best one by far
Reviews for "[R.22].Punching Holes In Me."
RoobyKillAll responds:
Thanks a bunch.
Mostly Good
The lyrics are pretty good, and the drum beat that goes under it fits perfectly.
The only issue I have with it is there's never any change in tempo or feeling in the lyrics. Other than that, it's great!
Keep up the good work, -=DM692=-
RoobyKillAll responds:
No change in tempo? I speed my flow tempo up a good few times. And yeah I get what you mean by emotion in the lyrics. I'm going to try turning up the track in my headphones so I throw my voice a bit more.
Thanks
Good Song But...
The song and lyrics are good, but it doesnt really sound like your putting all you got into those lyrics. Just kinda sounds like your talking through run on sentences. I think if you actually rapped the lyrics with the beat of the song, it would of been better. But remember this for any future projects, you gotta show that emotion especially if your the one who made it.
RoobyKillAll responds:
Yeah I've no idea what you're talking about. I'm not going to rap 5 syllable words here. I rap words people use every day. I'm using complicated rhyme schemes using simplistic words, talking from the bottom of my gut here.
lol at everyone telling me to show more emotion. What, want me to cry on the track?
Simple
Lyrics was to simple, the vocab was a little kindergarden, kept a good flow about it, the insturmental was dope, and you are write it was a bit annoying but lol good work I guess
RoobyKillAll responds:
Not your kind of rap I guess bro.