Better than the first
Things do look better. Keep working at iit for suture works. I'm sure if you do the graphics will continue to improve. You could do more with these character. MAybe have some of story line and such.
Reviews for "J-B curiousity"
ZooL152004 responds:
you need better KeyBoaRd conTrol, thanks for the review, things will improve in time. nice
Cute to start, but then kind of random
A pretty cute flash! :)
Nothing out of the ordinary but a cutesy flash and I loved your cartoon style, the jellybeans looked awesome! The music from 'Skullkid' was good and I liked the way at the beginning the music stopped whenever there was any action.
The story was kind of funny but it was also very random, and I don't really think in a good way. I loved the looks at the beginning of the flash it later on it just began to look very badly MS Painted, and maybe I'm acting dumb but I didn't really understand what this was supposed to be about or the purpose for it. The Jellybeans just started randomly beginning to be killed by thsoe purple blobs, what happened there?
However, though it was random I appreciated it's almost 'wacky' style so this gets above average, well done :)
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ZooL152004 responds:
random is such fun that when making our toons, we dont think to add a plot, so purple balls and other stuff randomly occur during the creative proccess. thanks for the huge review. nice.
Some tips....
Widen the screen so we can't see any of the white! The drawings and tweens were well done, but a character like that is too easy to tween. But still:
Fivened!
WOW
This is a good piece of Flash. The only criticism i can make is make a better pre-loader.
I think I've heard the music somewhere else before....
Good characters, nice animation and I hope you make more random movies.
ZooL152004 responds:
pre-loaders are not really on my priority list as the purple balls slowly take over my mind. thanks for the review. nice.
Fun
Not bad, kinda fun to watch. Ever though of putting some Physic to the ball?
ZooL152004 responds:
we are looking into newgrounds tutorials for physics and other things. glad you like it though. thanks for the review. nice.