Umm... a good start?
I really think you should pay more attention to details in flash movies... all you did here was making basic object-moving stuff and not 'real' animation... you ought to try and make one good full-length quality movie, instead of releasing several movies that aren't so good. The bases for the jokes are ok, I guess.. but if you don't want to ruin the punch of the joke you really should add some content to them.
Good luck.
It wasn't supposed to be that good, we just did four ten second long flashes and put them together, what would you expect? Another Bitey of Brackenwood? I think not, my n00b friend!
this is soooo bad...
I dont see why people say this is a good start...
I started a month ago and have WAY better graphics as you two...
this was very ugly. and dont say it wil get better... you can do this or you cant... if you cant draw on a pc its over for you...
Hahaha, what an idiot! I also started only one month ago, and I already have over 25 flashes in the portal! You're just a stupid n00b.
It's not that bad.
Dude, its a good start. Don't post right away though. Progress further and you will surely make better movies. Go for it!
Thanks.
Pretty f*ckin' bad...
I'm glad that you recently learned to use flash. Or so it seems judging by this submission. I haven't seen your other submissions, but I doubt I want to. I don't even know how to use Flash. I'm usually too busy to learn it... plus, I have a short attention span and very little patience, so, in the case of flash animations, you have me beat. But just a little advice for next time: People that learn the early stages don't submit these kinds of things. They immeadiately get blammed and bad ratings and what not. But alot of people take what they know and develop it further, creating an animation that appeals to certain veiwers. I'm sorry, but this is crap. Take inspiration from some of the other artists on NG and make it your goal to make flashes that people enjoy. Put some time into it. The longer it takes, I'm sure that means you spent more time perfecting it and adding things to make it good. Don't get discouraged, but think really hard if you make an animation. Decide whether or not you think it will appeal to viewers and get good votes.
If it's one thing I learned from life, it's do what you like and never give up, even if you recieve bad criticism.
It wasn't supposed to be over the top or anything, we just made a few shorts about anything the hell we wanted and put them together for a collaboration, and that's how it's gonna be for the entire '-0rcA- & DomFera' series. By the time we finish nine or so of these, both of our flash skills will have improved a bit.
The 1 thing...
That made this flash good was stewie from family guy and you could have even picked a better clip there. All the skits were predictable and looked as if a five year old had drawn them in a flip book.
But you're ugly, so I don't care.