Looking good as always
Glad you took my advice on placing the "advance" button in one space. Made it a lot easier to advance the text. I noticed the whole P Factor sounds inspired by Breath of Fire IV, with different people possessing auras of differing strengths and such.
Some of Crey's text was a bit hard to read (on the bottom line), but that's a minor complaint. Plus there's some development in character with Lou and Serika.
You should check the Sprite Club on the BBS some time too. Click my username, then scroll down to my BBS posts and click on that to get there easily, as I've posted in there pretty frequently.
One last thing regarding sound. Are there any specific sites where I can get some of the sounds you used (the VG ones) or is there a way of extracting it from an emulator somehow? I'm planning a few movies myself and it'd help me out if you could let me know.
Keep up the good work, and I hope the cliffhanger's resolved fairly quickly.