Holy freaking god.
That was pretty graphic intense. No mistakes, nothing. It seems like you accomplished exactly what you wanted to. Like how you made fun of all those flashes with the crappy audio, and how you have 3 or 4 ppl acting out a single character, and how you have replacements halfway through the flash.
Yay for a parody of a parody! (And I suggest that none of the newbs attempt anything like this cuz they will most likely fail miserably; do not take offense, it is definetly challenging).