ok..
this is the truth your story line is the best bit.... but a part from the descent story line it sucked.. the graphics were shotty and the animation was crappy.. but if you keep praticing and look at some tutorials or something you will probley end up making a good flash cartoon... ps. if thats the main charcter make him more cooler looking and mobile instead of a crappy weel. because that wll just make it harder to make action scenes cooler looking.