white outlines were the downfall of this animation
Yeah....could've been better, good effort though
Reviews for "POISON"
WADEMACHINE responds:
the white outlines where what made it happyness
O.K.
The movie was pretty good, except that music sucked ass. Coherency is nice to hear in music. Not just random beeping noises made in Acid. Even in techno.
WADEMACHINE responds:
TO THE BOATHOUSE
Not bad.
I have very little complains visually about the animation. It is well put together, and though the art isn't super high quality, it doesn't need to be. Now for the music, it isnt bad, I read the other reviews so I understand you made it yourself. The problem with the music is how it is mixed. If you want some tips on mixing ect email me through my profile and i'll be happy to help you out.
WADEMACHINE responds:
your e-mail isn't in your profile but mines WADEIDIOT@hotmail.com so e-mail me some time i am not too great at makeing my own music so any help would be appreciated thanks
Well...
It was pretty good,but charachters you could done better.
WADEMACHINE responds:
there were no characters well apart from
human and zombie
that's all and if your not happy i hate you
Hard to see the dudes...
The movie was good. I'm a sucker for the whole zombie thing. Just two things. First, with the white outline around the characters it made it hard to see them at times. While I admire your attempt at uniqueness, it made the whole presentation a little less Enjoyable. Now secondly, Take your time while designing the graphics. Don't rush to put it up. fine tune your skills and put out a better flash. I'm looking forward to your next movie.
WADEMACHINE responds:
okay thanks
i like constructive reviews but sorry the white outlines are just how the poeple look in stoopidville in all three of my stoopidville animations there like that
waiting for a puddle, dreamign about high and this one sorry but yeah i will put a little more effort into my next aniamtion though sorry