mneh
good start, but you dont have any original flare. so id quit
Reviews for "The Matrix Load Program"
FilamentProductions responds:
Well, whatever. Your opinion is your opinion.
a good start
It's a good start, but the sounds need cleaning and the script is a bit long and boring. More speed, substance and originality and it's good.
FilamentProductions responds:
Thanks for the review!
Um... what was he saying?
Dude.... what the frell was up with that sound quality? It was atrocious and filled with background static. If you're going to do voice overs give the wav file a decent sprucing beforehand.
It was also pretty... well, boring. Interesting style and idea but really it was pointless - the humour was sparse but definitely existing. You could have done more definitely.
Animation was bog standard movie-clips that just repeated again and again and again with a few new objects appearing here and there.
You could have expanded on this a lot more and given much more humour to it. It's got the roots of something funny but seriously, too many problems, too slow and far too hard to understand what 'Neo' is saying.
FilamentProductions responds:
Ah. Well, thanks for the advice/critisism. Sorry about the sound though. I was going to fix it but I couldn't record it again because I couldn't time it right.
Meh...
Never noticed neo spoke so slow...
and the intro music wasn't the proper music...
done with keyboards...not saying its a bad thing..
And the so called "jokes" weren't funny. the "virus" joke was slightly funny. but the animation/slow speaking neo just ruined it.
FilamentProductions responds:
Whatever you say.
qute good thinlin on the virus
pretty good but i dont believe it took u a month i could make similar thing in like 3 hours but well done anyway keep it up and why dont u try something more original
FilamentProductions responds:
Thanks for the advice.