I think you have a lot of potential
I think if you just sharpen your skills, make your presentation more professional you will be well on your way, because honestly this DOES show potential.
I think that you were very creative with limited resources (by which I mean you were able to create the illusion of depth and motion with simple big black lines).
okay
what's Evoltion? do you mean Evolution? this is a very random movie of random stuff.. drawn very poorly and has that seizure stuff in it... "and it all ended in a pop"... right.. this doesn't make sense.
i felt like putting evoltion.. so sue me. im not a dumbass i just felt like putting evoltion.
it wasnt supposed to make sense. it was supposed to confuse you and i do disagree with drawing poorly because it really wasnt. yes they were great drawings of stick figures!
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I'm not really giving it a legitimate review in the number cause i turned it off at the "words of anger" part. It wasn't that good and not much of an evolution. Its more like the concept of free writing where you let your subconscious run with it and write what comes to mind except in animation form. Also, in the red lettering in the beginning it spells motefucker... you left out the 'h' and the 'r' in mother.
yea. it cut out some words. if u notice it says bra instead of brain. in the worlds it cut out h and r was cut out as well.
im sorry u didnt like it. its not my best as i said. its me doodling for about 46 minutes
Hmmm.....
My understanding of the word 'evolution' is that there should be some difference in quality... it all looks pretty basic to me. The sound effects were a big mistake as well - they interfered with the music.
Mybe you should ask yourself 'Is there a point to me submitting this to Newgrounds?' next time. I'm honestly surpised this didn't immediately get blammed.
i meant (almost) everything i put in it
the title was for the movie is evoltion. not evolution. i think the sound if good overall as well as other people.
there is always a point to submit something. to get honest reviews. im not surpised it did how it did do. it did have skill. i have seen alot worse. and i have definatley seen alot better.
I'm being generous
Poor spelling, sloppy text, sloppy animation, a poor attempt at humour, stick figures and generally no reason for it to exist.
poor spelling. meant to do it
sloopy text. accidently got cut off.
poor attempt at humour. ur opinion.
stick figures. stick figures? so..? ur point?
and their is a reason to exist. what is it? its that i want it to.