uuuuughh....
ok, first of all, the good news. graphics were great. but graphics arent' everything. for example, there must be something that keeps ur audience interested. the thing is, this flash is slooooooww. i got to the monk part and i'm reading this thing and i'm like, ok, what else? and 5 min later it went to another script and i was like, ok, what else? in fact, i didn't ask what else. i just exit the thing. next time, make it a little faster...
Pretty but,
that has got to be one of the most boring things I've ever seen.
Just not so great
I don't know if you were trying to show some sort of point or if you are just ummmmm well I can't think of anything to call you right now but maybe I will some day later but in the mean time. The graphics were amazing the sound terrific but the really big problem I found was that you switched between the Bible and Buddah, now I'm not sure but I think those might to very different religions.
huh
wtf was this ur R.S. coursework or something, in that case give it to ur teacher we dont care
but nice story anyway kinda slow
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i feel dumb reviewing cause i didn't even finish the whole thing as i was bored out of my skull. the little screenshot on the frontpage looked good, otherwise it was just panning across some drawings and text.
also, i cringed when i read that line, "they drift through the mind's night sky like old snow." what the hell is old snow? a lot of the writing was contradictory and just some nonsense.
i'm all for deep flash and stuff, but you need to have a little something more to your projects. yeah, i didn't finish it, but that's probably an even stronger sign that it needs work.