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i thought the text stayed on way too long...but thats just me.
Reviews for "Broken Saints CH 14 ACT 1"
Masterfully done... Tactful and engaging
No doubt those who do not know much about buddhism, or rather, the path to enlightenment and the nature of nirvana, will not experience the full effect of this story, but im sure that even they were deeply impressed. I for one was astounded. Eloquently written, and poetically expressed. I merely wish i knew more about the box... i greatly anticipate the next act.As for my former reviewers request for a commentator, i feel that this flash is wasted on those who are too lazy to read. Keep it as it is, and let your mind be the voice.
Finally, a story!
At first, I was dissapointed to notice that this was not so much an animation rather than a series of still images, but then I started immersing myself in the actual story, and I was deeply impressed. Finally someone who can write! The language was poetic, and added life to the story. I can't wait to see the next one.
Only one suggestion... For those who are too lazy to read, how about getting a narrator to read the lines as well? Just an idea...
Pretty but,
that has got to be one of the most boring things I've ever seen.
uuuuughh....
ok, first of all, the good news. graphics were great. but graphics arent' everything. for example, there must be something that keeps ur audience interested. the thing is, this flash is slooooooww. i got to the monk part and i'm reading this thing and i'm like, ok, what else? and 5 min later it went to another script and i was like, ok, what else? in fact, i didn't ask what else. i just exit the thing. next time, make it a little faster...