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Now this is one hell of a submission. You were right about the audio. It seems as though all your concepts for your storyline came through perfectly in the audio on here, and my speaker setup definatly did it justice. Wow, is all I have to say about that.
And for the storyline.. What can I say? This seems to be one of the most breath-taking storylines on Newgrounds. Easily comparable to a great novel.
The animation and colour really add to the feel of everything. You seem to have created an offset, yet simplistic view of this flash's world.
.. Again, this seems to be one of the most promising submissions on Newgrounds, and the internet, to come out as of yet. This is comparable to the awkward and interesting worlds of Edward Scissorhands, Donnie Darko, and even Alice in Wonderland, however dont get me wrong.. This episode has obviously proven itself worthy of this twisted world genre with it's orgininality.
Alot of hard work thrown into this one. Dont rush yourself with the rest of the series, the more you polish, the better.
As for suggestions? I have none. Everything was done in your own way, and that is why I gave you a 10 for style and audio.
I never give out tens.
P.S. The last scene was epic. I have not seen much like it in flash. Well done.