i liked it
It seemed like it was going to suck in the begining but it had an unexpected twist at the ent i didnt realy know wat was going to happen to the guy but right when he got to about level 23 on the elivator i knew wat was going to happen but that story has been done befor . But dont get me wrong i still liked it .
It's been done before? I swear I didn't know. Fuckin' hell, you come up with a good idea and it's bloody been done before. Now I'm sad, but still grateful for you alerting me to this. Thanks *sob*.
haha, good stuff
although i picked the ending as soon as he made the dive for the gun, it was still pretty cool. it was nice and long, with some good humor in it. the graphics werent all that good, and i think that even some colour on some of the white walls would have made a difference to the movie.
the animation was good though - pretty smooth walking and facial expressions, but not a lot of mouth synch.
overall it was funny, long and well made. keep it up.
7.5/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!!)
I did it all sketchy and rough and in black and white on purpose, and I stand by my decision. And when I made this I couldn't do mouth sync, plus it's 24fps and mouth synching would have made it even slower.
Funny
That made me laugh. YAY. But I have a question. Was the guy with the gun in on the surprise party or was he for real?
Seven.
I saw it coming from a mile away, but not the real gun. Why in the world would they use a real gun with real ammo?
Good job
The graphics were good, for stick figures (over-used, but hey, still works). I thought the music went along with the video perfectly and I loved the voiced acting. I think you strayed from you're point when you when on about how people are spending their money on fast-food though.
In the end I give you a 7 for this piece of work. I don't agree with you're end message (guns only lead to trouble if you're stupid about them. Taking a LOADED gun to work is really, really stupid....), but hey to each their own.
I did stick figures because at that stage I was still learning (Well, we're ALWAYS learning, ooh deep and meaningful, ok I'll shutup now) and I didn't feel too confident doing...ummmm...non-stick figure characters. Thanks for the comment about the voice acting, I thought Doug (voice of Jon) didn't do a great job, some people have said things about that. I had to put the 'Fuck Da Corporation' bit in for personal reasons, and to allow Jon to sneak up, and also to establish Bob as very bitter and cynical. Also, I stand by my statement that guns are not cool. You say that they lead to trouble only if people are stupid with them. But people are bound to be stupid, it is inevitable. Maybe it's cuz here in Australia guns are illegal and I kinda grew up with that. I don't understand why I've written such a long response to this particular review, I'd better shutup now. Bye, and thanx.