Hey this was good for u first not 2 second flash
It was good, i judged it on how the story was and like it made sence, but like instead of making 12 of em' , maybe try to make like 6 and make them longer... well this is just my advice but i liked it.... like its not the BEST, but its good. Much better than most of the new flashes getting added! keep going like this, with more practice, comes ur flash on the front page.
ok I will... now thinking about 12 does seem alot. But the plot is long too. well uhm I'll just make as many as there are going to be. But yeah I'll definantly shorten the series a bit.
OK. I will try to be constructive here.
Well, on the positive side, it does appear as if you are trying, just really inexperianced. You should really make an attempt at voices, cause most people will instablam something with just subtitles. You're probably just starting out and it aint fair to crush your spirits just yet, but this did kinda blow. And only kinda. Like I said, there was effort and some decent application of knowledge. Just keep trying. In general, it needs to be longer, have voices, and have some sort of decipherable story. All things which you should be capable of doing with more effort. Keep trying.
ok I will
and thank you for not trashing my submission
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What was with the tron ripoff? And wtf... sorry, but pt2 better look completely different and actually be worth watching.
wait I've never seen tron. Oh and part 2 will
hmmm
Well u blam other peoples shit, theres a fine line between effort and bullshit, and this explains this line. i Really beleive u should spend a good week on something instead of putting together a piece of shit induced piece of crap like this. Im Out
your mom never hugged you did she?
u submitted this before!
and just as i said last time this is a great idea but poor animation and the score is all 0's cus u have submitted this b4!
yes but I updated
besides you need this one to understand to other episodes.
or it's just like watching dragonball z
miss one episode it seems jacked up