great but some very obvious flaws...
now.. of course, who am i to judge somebody who can make stuff i can't even dream of making yet. but heres my 2 cents anhow.
first off. the goth thing... ok, lots of peole are goth.. but making the whole screen almost all black? not too smart. you can't see the ledges... so your simply shooting blind.. also. the enimies can shoot at you while their off screen... and when your under a ledge, you can;t jump up... i'm not even sure they WERE ledges... i did like the ammo spray and the shells all over the place tho, that was awsome... but all you need to do is make the gamea tad more visible, and you'd have the makings of a shweet arcade type game here! so good work.