nice, the chick in the middle looks like tristana from LOL, not sure if intentional or a coincidence.
Reviews for "SUM GIRLS"
Ha! Mia Stone looks just like her name
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Wow, Spazkid, you really improved. I don't know if the stumpy proportions you used to draw on your characters was intentional but I think this is a step up from that.
I have some criticism, though, if you don't mind. The demon girl in particular looks very awkward. Her torso seems to be missing bulk and is too flat looking. Her stomach, arms and boobs should be in perspective, based on the position of the legs and head, which are facing toward the left. Her left leg looks like it was drawn backwards. And her legs should be drawn close together, because when real girls pigeon-toe there isn't a gap between their thighs.
The blue girl's head and face has a lot of mistakes. I don't know why you drew her nose so low on her face when her head is down only slightly. It should be closer, and perhaps a line should be drawn along the middle of her nose to show some structure. We should see her mouth, too, it had no reason to be hidden. Her goggles are drawn flat and would benefit from some perspective and solidity. We'd see more of this character's hair, too, since we'd be seeing more of the top of her head. Her hand holding the necklace is crudely drawn and doesn't look like it's holding anything, or even pulling down on her necklace. I think her other hand has pretty obvious mistakes. Where she's placed is confusing, we see the other characters from their ankles yet we see the blue character from her knees. Is she leaning on something?
Brown haired girl doesn't have too many flaws. She's quite cute. From that angle we'd see some of the back of her arm though, she looks like she's sticking her elbow out so we can't see it.
Advice: try drawing you characters with 3-dimensional forms like spheres and prisms. Shading can give a character more volume but it helps to have your characters drawn like they exist in three dimensions. I have no clue if you're already doing that but it doesn't look like it too me.
Overall, not bad, but could be a lot better.
Spazkid responds:
thanks for the tips man, my biggest issue would have to be legs (as im sure everyones figured out by now) Also the blue girl is leaning down and she doesnt have a nose those are her lips.
but yeah I'll deff keep these in mind thankyou.
YAAYYY FINALLY! xD
Thanks, Spaz!!
I know I told you already, but I think it's awesome. Why you gotta be so self-critical all the time?!
yeah im not really a friend of mature art. but this is actuarly nice.
but the girl's "you know what" on the left. is a little bit out of place though :S
in overall, good