well...
It's a decent flash, I guess, but you definitely fell short in a few areas:
- your characters needed to be smoother.
- the sound needs work. it felt distant from the action.
- the lack of a preloader and the looping shows a lack of polish.
It's a short, so it's not too bad, but you've got a long way from being a Krinkel-ite. Keep at it though; you can only improve.
you need to work on the smoothness of animation
one of the things that made the real madness so good
also, fresh ideas?
not terrible, but you've got a hell of a series to live up to trying to make madness imitations
would have been great,
if it was original
where do i start..
yeah it was ok... but the efort in it was bad ,crap infact. It would be better with a preloader, ending , replayer prolly be blammed but good try in the animation, i know you could do much better. you should try real hard to make a major flash and maybe enter the top 50 o.O
needs improvement
Your animation style isn't quite at the madness combat level yet, but it ain't bad. And please put a stop script at your last frame so your movie doesn't continually loop. Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll be at the madness combat level someday.