I know it's none of my business...
It's just that I don't quite see the connection between posting an unfinished flash to Newgrounds and not getting into university. I suppose if it's the only way to get it to whomever needs to get it... Anyway, what there was, was good. The art and animation alone make it worth saving, although having the audio component in place would work wonders.
Good luck on getting in.
Dude
This flash has so much potential. If you put music- I'm dead serious, any music to it, it would be so awesome. The animation is sweet, and the style is incredible. You HAVE to resubmit this with sound, man! Awesome job.
Yes!
You've got a great start to this flash here. Add some sound and more story (if you want) and away you go! Great graphics...just excellent. Keep up your hard work. (As cliche as that sounds *sigh*)
OMFG
It would be a crime against humanity for you to not resubmit this with sound. The animation was so awesome. It could have done without some of the scratchy frame shifty stuff in the middle when his vision gets messed up, but Im sure that theres a reason for that that Im not catching. This is an awesome animation. All it needs is some awesome sound to go with it.
add a soundtrack
add a soundtrack and you've got a winner. the art an animation was very well done, i loved the detail that went into the pictures...
i'm giving in a high score for the art and style alone.