At least it's not stick people jerking off.
Not bad, lots of room for improvement in the art department, but at least it had animation, and it was a great effort. Practice makes perfect so keep it up!
Reviews for "Wind Finale - 01"
well not too shabby
It was nice and its apparent u spent some time on this, but this seems somewhat reminiscent of....oh.....what was it.......ummm...oh
yea, EVERY ANIME EVER MADE! you seem to have taken a little bit from every popular anime out there, that dude even looks like kenshin, and was that an adult oob attacking the young girl? Anywho dont take this wrong just constructive criticism, those animes are popular for a reason ;)
Well done! Very good so far... a few things though
It started off quite well! Although it looks like you have done what i do all the time, you have an idea you start to make it but it takes SO long!
It looks like you did the smallest amount you could for some frames, where as others you have great detail. For example at the start the clouds looked like clouds, but towards the end they were just white marks. the ears on some of the characters looked Very rushed. It does look like you just had to get it finished and submited as fast as you could, its not always the best way.
But in saying all this you have a real talent and i would like to see you spend a month or so on something, making it just so, than rushing to get it done. Also do what a lot of others do, don't just do one at a time do 5 or 6 then you never get bord with one movie, you never want one to end and in that you put more detail than ever into each work.
Just an idea.
Hope to see more in the future. DB
hmmm...alright
this was an alright movie. graphics were more than i expected (when i saw the loading screen) i thought it was gonna be some paper looking person that wouldnt have any animating scene just like tweens and crap. but it was good. the mountains.......the mountains need ALOT of work. no effence but it literaly looked like someone crapped on them. (cus the colors) and its just like squigly lines and stuff. and i would suggest for the bg, use the brush to draw it. size 2 or 3. great job ^-^
People please cut him some slack
Remember this is a cartooon
it doesnt have to be exactly like reality?
Well like someone else sed da sopunds effects made me laugh 2 but da animation wise was preety gd and also some of da faces got really messed up tru da cartoon as it went onn try to show some consistency