NICE!!
Dude that was awesome. It was like all serious and then he just falls off. So funny
Reviews for "The Stare off"
Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
I...I...I... I don't know what to say. Thanks for getting the point of this cartoon. you have given me my first 10.
Awsome
Ha ha ha, that was funny. I really liked the animations, they weren't too bad. But when that guy fell I just started crackin' up, I have no idea why.
Originality is an issue
Actually you admit it's not your first flash and if you look under previous submissions you have one of those already. However the style is something I can't seem to escape; Anime inspired! while the style is tired the hand drawn feel gives something extra. assuming that if you would have put in SFX in, it would be good. I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt, 4/5
My only advice is; Be more original in your style.
Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
Original like what? I've always drawn like this. Anyway I'm concerned mostly with storylines. P.S. I didn't animate "Avatar: Prologue" I just came up with the story. This is just my first animated by me and story by me flash. The other 3 flashes I've animated were crap and I didn't submit them.
A very good quicky, I enjoyed it.
It was actually very good despite some of the minor errors I noticed. It's pretty nice, but there are many things you can still improve upon. Your artwork is pretty good, but it didn't stay consistant. At different points during the flash it was choppier than at others and that really took away from the flash, you should always go for high detail at all points in a flash. But the concept was very original and I got a few laughs out of it, so I find that to be the strengths of your flash. Another thing I noticed was the very bad sound quality that was used in your flash. Near the beginning I couldn't hear anything and near the end I could faintly here some backround music, you should really make it more audible, that would help your score. Overall I did find the flash pretty funny and hope to see some more works from you in the future, keep up the good work and the hard effort and it'll pay off.
Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
Finally a good review, sheesh. Also there was no sound for the start and there was no sound for the guy falling in. I didn't have internet connection when I finished it so I had to wait a week or two for it to be up again. When I finally got it back up I just decided screw it and didn't get any sound effects off the internet. That is the sound effects deal. But sheesh this is my first flash why do you all have to be so dang agressive man?
great job!
loved it! great and funny ending too! keep them coming!