My god what the hell
A few guild lines,
Longer
Clear Story Line
More Dialoge
for shows that are series there should be enouge length, diaolge and and clearity for the watch to understand what the hell is going on without having to go back, if you need to do the thing where is says "currently on ..." or "last time on" something like that and review the last episode or what is going. Only if you need to do that though!