Well, it IS a class project..
Now, I realize you're 13, and you haven't done any other movies, and I've done none of them, so I won't complain about the quality of any of it. And the sound effect of the beeping reminded me of all those annoying soundtracks to filmstrips from when I was in school.
All I CAN complain about is the fact that, even if it is about violent video games affecting kids, you also have to mention that it's not JUST the video games. After all, an hour of daily news shows more graphic violence than any single level of Doom, Quake, GTA, or any of the other kinds of games. The US has a violent culture, not just their entertainment. Basically, if you're going to do another school project on a social topic, make sure you add in other causes or even solutions.
Just a suggestion, take it or leave it. I won't threaten to castrate you or wish for ass raping of your corpse or whatever else these idiots spout out.