lol that was cool as
nice man, well then u proved it, u proved that a movie does not need nice animation and all them nice things to be good, this was entertaining and i guess thats all that matters.
keep em comin
cya
Reviews for ""Tutorial": 15 seconds"
olaftheblue responds:
Thank you very much. It is kind of funny, though - if I had submitted "The Adventures of Garland" here, I'm sure it had been blammed. Now, I call it a parody, and people give it nines and tens on humor! :-)
Thank you for your good words - hopefully both animation, sound and other things will be very improved when I actually start making movies instead of making parodies of movies. :-)
hmm...
You forgot 2 things, 'great' movies for some reason almost always also have either badly drawn blood or cocks, but besides that interesting parody, even if it's a little text heavy.
olaftheblue responds:
Thank you. Yeah... I was thinking about adding lots and lots of blood to it. But at the same time I like the effect of Garland entering the battle, the screen going black and then everything is over in a matter of seconds and there is no blood and he's not affected or hurt from the battle in any way at all... Which is why I decided to leave blood out of the movie. Maybe I could have made a text chapter about it, but... It's kind of enough text here already, so... I guess you can call that my "outtakes" section.
As for cocks ... Well, although it was supposed to be an example of all the bad things, I tried keeping it as "family friendly" as possible. I was hoping to make a movie which was approved for all audiences, as I have a sneaky suspicion people making the entrys I comment on aren't always 17+. But then I just HAD to add SOME nudity in it, because that IS what people do to "improve the quality" of these movies. To get it as accurate as possible I should probably have added a cock in there too, but it simply was too gross for me to add a cock for no obvious reason. Maybe if there ever is a sequel... (heh, sincerely doubted!)
Thanks for reviewing!
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The trperiter at the start was a nice touch heh, i like how you had audio it it, but the overall design and look to it was not pleasing to the eyes, but as for the tutorial, it was helpful somewhat so notbad...
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I dont like to read a bunch of crap...
I just flipped through the pages and didnt read them until i got sick of that song which wasnt very long.. sorry reading a bunch of crap is boring why not make less friggin txt and put some action in there. IM NOT AN ORANGE TACO
olaftheblue responds:
I agree... it has way too much text. Still, though, I don't really know what to do about it. The humor is in the text, and let's face it - I'm no big artist and the interactivity consists of pressing "next" buttons, so it's the humor I have to build everything upon.
If I remove some text, someone will probably complain that I removed a fun part. I could try using less text on each page, and fill in with animations, but that would make the entire file awfully long. I could try replacing some of the text with other ways of saying the same, the question is how - I would probably voice-over this if I only had a microphone, which I don't yet. Also, some of the fun (in my opinion) is that it's supposed to look like a tutorial... But I know that means I lose people not too wild about reading long text, so...
I can only say that I agree with you, it has way too much text - but I'm not sure how to fix that problem.
Thank you very much for reviewing, and I'm happy on your behalf that you're not an orange taco.
Well nachozS
I understand the god damn irony but this just sucked, this is worse than getting a beating from 12 elephants carrying spiked clubs......on a monday!!!!!!
olaftheblue responds:
Yeah, I have to agree with you. Naturally I don't agree that it sucks - if I did, I wouldn't have made it. But this IS my first movie ever, and it is impossible to please everybody with one movie - especially on the first attempt. So, what some people love, others hate.
Naturally, you would have done me a great favour if you had told me _what_ about the movie sucked, so I could try doing that part different next time, instead of just making me aware that there are people who think the movie sucks (I already know that from the score, as it has gotten its share of zeroes and ones). But thank you for reviewing anyway. Hopefully, the next whatever I make won't suck this bad (it won't be for a while, though, as my trial period runs out in a couple of weeks, I won't be home those weeks, and I can't afford Flash right now).