Short, but very well animated
I liked it.
Make it longer, make a story.
And please, for the love of pizza, spell "a lot" correctly. It is TWO WORDS.
Short, but very well animated
I liked it.
Make it longer, make a story.
And please, for the love of pizza, spell "a lot" correctly. It is TWO WORDS.
I agree w/the guy before me
I thought the characterization was just wonderful... I don't know what it was about it that made me relate to that weird monster. A wonderful beginning to a story... but then it cuts off painfully right when the story is supposed to begin. take it further and this could be really good
awwww
Poor Alphin he needs a hug! I think he's so cute! Can I give him a hug without him like eating me alive or something? Because it looked like he had blood on his fur...maybe he ate something extra rare?
haha. er....... what?
its kinda sick stuff..... sad.... but funny maybe?
it has something..... not normal something...
nice stuff....
K_m.
Well, well... as much as I was flattered by the first two reviews, this is what I'm talking about. This is an HONEST review... the best of all.
:p
If you don't develope this i will hurt you.
I will hurt you, i will show you exactly how painful a toater can be when it's lodged in awkward places!
The Character, Alphin, was awesome; you added some depth to him and brought him to life, that's something not a lot of people can do.
You have the beginning of what could be, and i hesitate to use the word, a beautiful character, you have characters for him to interact with and you have the enviroment. everything you need to get a good start is right there, there's potential for a popular series here.
Anyway, good start, do more. i'm giving you a 3.