Very good
Very nice job, I am also into FBF work and I am working with other artists on a series of collabortion flash movies. some of my work can be found in my profile, n my S/N is Aerdail. Contact me if you are interested, once again, ver niice! :)
It's ok
It wasnt great but it wasnt bad, put in a working preloader, and a little bit of sound, even just overlay of techno and it would be better
You should finish it before submitting
This looks cool but why do people submit these unfinished Flashes?
List
Heres the list you need for you next flash
*Music
*Preloader
*Credits
The movie was actually very cool, if I were you
I would add the things from my list and update the whole thing
Good job
If you do that, I will vote 8
:)
See Two Ch. 1 Fallen angel, which is the finished version of what I started playing with here. I'm working on Two Ch. 2 right now.
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not bad, but if you put in sound and stopped the loop it would be way better
Yeah, I could've done some simple cleanup on it, but I really only tossed it up for those who liked "Two: Ch1" it's basically concept art.