gr8
to be honest i loved it. Ive read the other reviews and some people can be so critical about the smallest thing. Fair enough it doesn't really go with the story. But i think its really gud. The drawing is gud and humour isn't so bad! I quite liked it. I'll watch out for anything else u make. Don't listen to some of these guys, in fact most people that give bad reviews dont even have anything of their own, so i wouldnt worry about it. They can't do anything like that themselves.. plus u made frontpage so u can just laugh at them. keep up the gud work