Weee
You made me laugh again :)
Excellent short..!
Keep it up !
Weee
You made me laugh again :)
Excellent short..!
Keep it up !
Thanks! Most of mine are short... Actually, I think all the ones I've actually finished are. Ah well. Glad you liked it!
twas good
that was funny i was getting kinda bored at first cause noting was happening but then the tank came and i just started laughing i thought it was really good not very original but good
On the right track...
Or at least under it.... Good job!
Nice tank
That was good. Really. Twist endings, even with foreshadowing, are fun. But you should've had more tanks.
Ahh the simple pleasures in life
That was greatly amusing.. not what I was expecting at all.. and I really like that. I wish I could leave a longer review, but Im off to watch your other flashes.. Good luck in your future work!
I'm glad you liked it! I made it with the intention of it being a sort of thanksgiving e-card, and sent it around to friends and family, and one of them convinced me to post it here. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you enjoyed my other submissions as well. Thanks for the review!