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Reviews for "Precious Little Chicken"

Good animation.

Animation/Graphics - The animation and graphics were very good. Looks like you are pretty good at drawing. The animation was smooth and everything seemed perfectly fine.

Story/Content - Very short.. I don't know if it makes a great flash all by itself, but what you had was alright. I really didn't find anything too funny about the content or the story of the flash though. That's why I think you could have built up to it and made it a bit longer. Maybe having here take eggs from the chicken, feed it, etc... For maybe a day or two and then have the chicken just kill her randomly. Perhaps it would have been a little bit harder to predict and would surprise the audience more.

Credits - The credits get a little section by themselves this time around. :D Ha, they were by far the best part in terms of humor in the entire flash. So to anyone who may be reading my review, WATCH THE CREDITS. They are good.

Audio - Ha, this is a part that I found funny. I liked the voice of the woman and the voice/music that you used during the credits. The music and sound effects that you used during the flash part itself was also pretty good.

Overall - The credits make the submission, but the animation itself is done very well.

~ Review Request Club ~

ForNoReason responds:

Yeah, I wrote this script when I was just starting to write seriously. I am curious on how it is so predictable, Ive heard that a lot about this flash lol. I was thinking about rewriting the story a little and maybe having a 4 year anniversary of the flash or something. I would just have to get an animator again lol. Maybe "Precious Little Chicken REDUX!" I dont know. Anyway thanks for your comments!

Sorry

Please set the image properties correctly, I below and over the black lines.

ForNoReason responds:

I fixed it... so maybe come back tommorow and vote 5!? Because your child misses you and you dont pay the child support? Maybe you can make it up to him?

lol

if i could see the movie i would review it, cuz its soooooooooo small

ForNoReason responds:

Take a look now! Its fixed and looks AWSOME!

lol ok......

ummm funny but, it's a rooster, not a chicken lol.

ForNoReason responds:

HEY! Maybe its a confused rooster? A cross dresser no less!

Good quality animation

~~REVIEW~~
this was a good animation, abit on the shortside, but it had some good quality of animation and humor and good little idea, the characters were well designed and you gave this animation good humor made me chcuckle in the end, so welldone on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind seeing a new version of this maybe a series of some sort with other ideas but the same idea basicly

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but abit short

~X~

ForNoReason responds:

Thank you much! Yeah, I would love to find some artists to make kinda a collab of this idea. See all the different takes on it. I think it is short enough that there could be a lot of added content in it. Oh well...