*Consctructive Critisizm*
It was definatly good, but not worthy of daily first place in my oppinion. The animation was rediculously smooth, which is very rarely pulled off in NG flash cartoons. The overall artistic structure didn't do anything for me though. I found your people poorly drawn, as if you finished them as fast as you could. If you had managed to pull off more detailed drawings with this smooth animation, you would definatly be on my fav list. Also, I find music without lyrics is better for 'toons such as this one, as it doesn't distract the viewer with thoughts of Linkin Park, or whoever wrote teh song that was playing in this submission.
~VW