dude omg i like it
dude this own3ds man...please for your next flash get some voice actors and this would be amazing i loved this dude you rule it was so great omg i need to watch it again its so amazing. the sound the style and animation was all done perfectly...i loved it... if u need any help man please dont hesitate to ask...i cant do flash at all but everything else is good i guess...keep up the really hard work and you will get front page in no time..
thanks for your comments, i appreciate it - i dont think its that good, everything that worked was kind of an accident until about half way through when i discovered how to use things - - come back in a few days and see me second one- it should be a lot better.
Was she wearing pants?
You have a great art style, but your storytelling is a bit iffy. Try to make a more solid storyline in the next submission. Great work otherwise.
to be honest it didnt have a story line until about half way through when i decided it would be a dream - it was kinda just an experanent
thanks for your comments
Very good for first one
The graphics were amazingly good for a first flash. The music was annoying and repetitive, You made it long though, which was nice. Try inserting some dialogue, doesent need to be with voice. Animation is a little chopu but you improve it with time.
thanks for your comments - i realize it wsnt very good, i didnt actually know kinda what i was doing until about half way through -- my next one should be better though.
thanks again!
nice job on this
it was a very good flash, i didnt quite understand the concept one bit but in this flash it didnt matter, it was well put together and even though i coulndt see what the idea was while it was playing i knew it had a backbone and even if someone may think there was no point or story line they are wrong, it did. way to go
not bad
I came into this flash ready to hit the good ol' blam button.....And even though it was a bit rough around the edges..it was actually quite good. I liked it. If this truly is your first flash.....I say unto you.."good show, good show" and I clap my hands in your general direction.