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Reviews for "The Story of Glenn"

Meh

I don't like flashes based on video games. Good flash skills, but it wasnt rly my style.

Eh.

Honestly, there are a couple of things to work with. First of all, the screen with your sprites is WAY too small. You have all that space for the window to type in your text. Take advantage of that same space. I hate to squint my eyes just trying to see what's going on.

The movement for the sprites is very choppy. You could use work in making it flow a little. Try to add some more frames in there.

Grammar. Lots of errors. Fix them.

The only thing I truly liked was the music. I have the soundtrack myself.

And is this simply a recap of Glenn's story? It's not very interesting to watch, since all you're doing is re-telling the story. Had you created an original story based on Glenn's story, it would have been a little different.

But keep working on it. I'll check out your next 2 parts for the series and see if anything improves.

bah

I'll assume this is your first movie ever and spare you any insults. Pretty much, this is choppy and a big recap of Chrono Trigger. If your going to recite stories, especially Frog's then you should do it when you atleast can tween, and distribute layers.

I voted 0 just because I don't like sprites.

Only joking. Isn't the best thing out there..... but it is..... adequate. Good effort. Marshmallow....heh....

Why

i know you used that Rpgmaker2000 thingy to make this, not flash. It lacked plot completely.

BLAH12445767 responds:

I actually didn't... I used Flash Mx, so... don't say things you don't really know.