A swear, this will kill my aura a bit...
Ugh, what an odd submission... Really, it is a unique idea, Kirby vs. Inu-Yasha, but it wasn't executed as well as it could've been. You obviously have great potential. Just, do everyone a favor and learn to spell... dumbass
Eh, I"m just screwing with ya man, but here's an idea: Make like, a sequel that involes it as an MMORPG... what with the whole abbreviatory-ness and the fairly frequent use of "noob"...
One last thing, Inu-Yasha is much smarter than that, and so is Kirby (even though, by rights, he can't really speak) AMke them smart... please? :)