very deep
i like great stories but like the others say it could use some sound and if u do put music make sure it's easy listenin and not rock or whatever it truly is harmful to my health. oh yeah graphics 2and lassly ushold switch the music every three or four tracks when u add it.
i have faith in u
A great story....
....but it would be better served with, perhaps, some musical underpinnings? Crossfades rather than abrupt frame jumps?
All in all, not too bad. And certainly an interesting adventure.
cool
nice report, i read the first few but then my eyes started to burn.. you should definitely think about using a microphone or using some music of some kind. maybe animate the story or something.
nope. nice try
ok first off, I dont really think slide shows belong on newgrounds. its for animation. you could have narrarated it and taken out all the reading.
second off, you made wwwwwaaaaayyyyyy too much reading for the average newgrounds user. I mean, we dont come to newgrounds for War and Peace length novels, we come for Itchy and Scratchy style cartoons. think before you work. and submit.
peace
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too much reading were looking for a movie not a history project