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Reviews for "Two - Ch1 : Fallen Angel"

damn

This is some very well animated flash movie. The look of it is so sweet, graphics of the characters and the backgrounds are amazing looking. I like how this was a intereactive comic type of flash. I'm excited to see what happens next. great work!

ArneTheTurtle responds:

Thanks! And thanks for the 9. I'll work hard to live up to it. As for the interactive comic feel, I felt I needed to have that in order to not have people miss the story, but voices would definately be better.

Very good..

For those who scream 'plagerism', plagerism is staling someones work and passing it off as your own.
For those who scream that the title must be changed because of the trailer 'fallen angle', wake up to yourselves. There are many movies that have the same name. And incidently, these two films dont.
I like the graphics, but can you make the screen larger, the clicking on the 'more' buttons kind of detracted from the over all ambiance of the film. Voices could be nice but arnt neccesary if everything else works right.
Im looking forward to the next one ;)

ArneTheTurtle responds:

Thanks Deslona, this was the first review I saw when coming back from the weekend. I'd like to do voices, and am hoping to, but need either voice actors or a way to record myself.. so , we'll see about that.

Thanks for the props! I'll be working hard on ep.2 this week.

Great!

I sense a very very fine entertaining story coming up here. Please, take your time and write the continuation carefully! This has everything to be a very nice story with interessting plot or to be a silly crappy shit with predictable plot and childish scenes. Currently, I bet this is gonna be a very nice amusing movie! Please, prove me right!!

Well, here's my hint to make it even better: can you enlarge the screen? I think this was really small. Believe me, a few more Bytes shouldn't be a problem if they mean better quality movies!

ArneTheTurtle responds:

Well, actually, I majorly messed up on filesize this time around. Note to self: don't post in a hurry again LOL.

As for screen size, I'm going to make ep.2 in a wider format, because I like the widescreen, but probably won't extend it upward much.

As for the plot, I've been writing it for over a year, and have written the skeleton of the story all the way to a sequel series, I doubt I'll let you down in that department.

Interesting...

I'll be coming back to see part two of this...

ArneTheTurtle responds:

I'll try not to dissapoint ^_^

Fallen Angel

Not bad, animation is kind of shaky but the plot makes up for it, probably the only reason this wasnt rated too highly was because of its name. Which is just stupid, this animation is nothing like Fallen Angel teaser therefore not plagiarism. Dont let em get u down Its a great piece of work.

ArneTheTurtle responds:

Thanks, hopefully ep.2 with a new title "Signata" should pass the "plagarism that isn't" test. *laugh* Thanks for the encouragement.