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Reviews for "Two - Ch1 : Fallen Angel"

damn

This is some very well animated flash movie. The look of it is so sweet, graphics of the characters and the backgrounds are amazing looking. I like how this was a intereactive comic type of flash. I'm excited to see what happens next. great work!

ArneTheTurtle responds:

Thanks! And thanks for the 9. I'll work hard to live up to it. As for the interactive comic feel, I felt I needed to have that in order to not have people miss the story, but voices would definately be better.

Its GoOd

The quality of this flash was good, the plot wasn't too understandable. The sound was good too, but they're weren't any voices.

ArneTheTurtle responds:

Was the plot not understandable or purposefully left you in the dark Hmmm? Hmmm??? *laugh* It will be a while before I give away ALL my secrets, but some are coming in the next ep.

not bad

i liked how he just went splat, but that wasn't the end of it. Write/ make the sequal/seris as quickly as possible (but make it good)

ArneTheTurtle responds:

Yeah, the splat was fun to do, because I thought a lot of people would expect him to grow wings and fly at that point, given the title. =) Thanks, I'm working on it.

Great!

I sense a very very fine entertaining story coming up here. Please, take your time and write the continuation carefully! This has everything to be a very nice story with interessting plot or to be a silly crappy shit with predictable plot and childish scenes. Currently, I bet this is gonna be a very nice amusing movie! Please, prove me right!!

Well, here's my hint to make it even better: can you enlarge the screen? I think this was really small. Believe me, a few more Bytes shouldn't be a problem if they mean better quality movies!

ArneTheTurtle responds:

Well, actually, I majorly messed up on filesize this time around. Note to self: don't post in a hurry again LOL.

As for screen size, I'm going to make ep.2 in a wider format, because I like the widescreen, but probably won't extend it upward much.

As for the plot, I've been writing it for over a year, and have written the skeleton of the story all the way to a sequel series, I doubt I'll let you down in that department.

Dont leave me hangin man

wheres the rest ???? I just git into it an its over . . . keep me posted

ArneTheTurtle responds:

Will do Tennessee. It's a lot shorter than I'd intended, but I got impatient with the editing and revision and adition because I didn't have any feedback. The feedback I've gotten so far is certainly good motivation to move ahead with Ep.2