Good show, good show old chap..
First, what I didn't like: a little cliché maybe, and no real point. The animation, well, I liked and didn't like. It seemed a little jumpy, but at the same time, it seemed to look like a personal style issue, and it didn't really work against the piece. Overall, I think it was very well done, good FbF work. With some developement, you have yourself a great, not good, cartoon.