Bravo!
You are a very talented indivual to to have made something so touching
Reviews for "Memory: Deleted Scene"
Stunning
Absolutely amazing. After watching the first part, this is the most touching flash I have ever seen coming equal first with Jeremy. This is the first I had heard of the book, but the story was so beautiful. I can see you have put a lot of effort into this flash and It deserves any portal award it gets. A magnificent work.
Oh... it's another "war protest" movie.
Ok, so I see the point you are making. I'll not criticize your point or spew my opinion about it.
That was incredible. Very good movie. The artistry of it was superb. The monologue sounded great. Even the effect you had on "LIFE" was well placed. I hope to see more of your submissions. KUTGW
Touching
This flash is truely touching. I had a couple tears but it was really good.
Awe
Allright - the first part, memory, was good. But it was confusing - and succeeded more at scaring me than touching me and reaching out to me. However, the fact that it did scare the crap out of me - once - and then kept me tense throughout the entire movie, made me go tense throughout this movie - I absorbed it a lot better than I think I would have otherwise.
The movie - this movie, is brilliant. Of course, one needs to have seen the other one as well as this to understand the contents, but.. well, I liked this one better. By a long shot. I... the part where he got to the friend, well, it moved me. It brought a tear to my eye. I cannot say this about any other flash movie, song, story, book, and at least the majority of the films I've seen. It really did. Touching, moving, affecting, whatever the word you want to use, it was brilliant.
One thing that... really wasn't as bad as you make it sound like is your voice acting. Really. It's great - the emphasis you put on certain words, the length, the speed with which you talk, all of it make the flash film a WHOLE lot better than it would have if you just had added some text to the film.
All in all - great work. The world needs more people like you.