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Myself i love the old pixelated things, so thats why graphics at 10, but its just my opinion. I know its hard to create these things sometimes, getting all teh proper sprites and stuff, but i gotta say one thing, length man, try and make it longer. If you get that and mabye form a partnership with someone, a funny guy, you can get more comedy involved in it and more poeple would like it, cause if its onre thing that this site likes, i'd say its comedy. Good luck with your next one.