Pretty good
While your theme/message/storyline was not really what I tend to respond to in flash animations, this was well done. The use of sprites can be forgiven easily due to the fact they are in fact representing...well, sprites (faeries). Keep up the good work!
Nice job
It was good, but not that good.
It was not the smoothest i have ever seen by far, expecially the ending got quite choppy. Did not transition well.
Your animation was quite good, looked unique and had a nice cartoony style.
The sound choice was okay, but really had nothing to it. I am not sure it fit the movie to a 'T'.
The point to it kind of escapes me... i understood the flash, but even with all its originilaity... it had no real storyline. The focus though obviously was portrayed the way you envisioned it, so i give kudos for that.
The water was green. Now of course, the water would be a bit green in a forest. Water is only the color of the light that reflects off of it, but it would not be THAT green, plus you forgot to take into consideration the color of the sky, the most important light source to water.
Overall, my only real complaint is the choppyness... much bigger videos have run perfect on my computer before... i do not see why this one couldn't. So i figure its an error on your part.
Towards the actual movie... it was good. I respect it and you as an animator. Could have been better, there are works of yours that i like more than this. Your animation was very good for you though.
There is room for imporvement, but very good job.
Good luck, mate.
NG Critic Rating
Introduction: 7.9
Impression: 8.1
Style(Graphics): 8.5
Movement: 7.5
Audio: 7.4
Emotion: 7.1
Originality: 8.5
Focus: 8.9
Personal Enjoyment: 7.9
Overall: 8.0
Rating: 4
Cheers,
K. Myst Williams
Well. It runs choppy indeed. But thats because of the detail. i have 3ghz and it still runs choppy. Just set it to medium. Thanks for the long and good review.
Nice.
I loved all the colors, the color firefly thing, and of course the watefall.
I don't think it matters if it's spring or not... O.o
Refreshing
Its refreshing to see somthing that doesn't have excess amounts of blood, nudity or otherwise juvenile topics on newgrounds. Well done, a very interesting idea, if you have time, would be to do one for each of the seasons. gj keep it up.
Good idea! i shall think about it!
its pretty good
its abit sad but the style and graphics are great overall:8