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Reviews for "When Spring Arises"

SKITTLES, I CRAVE SKITTLES!!

just cuz i put a 0 in those spots, dosent mean i think they deserve 0's, i just wanted the blank out those areas so i could put a random 666... anyways, those little buggy things made me want skittles... i hate skittles....hmmmm

Pretty environment.

I thought it was a nice little short.

Wow great

This was very well done, cool music clip, great sense of "growth", with each creation multiplying and then leading to an even greater one, etc...

Not bad...

Really laggy... to many movie clips dude... oh and you SO jacked that first waterfall from the Brackenwood thing. DONT EVEN TELL ME YOU DIDN'T!

GAMECUBICLE responds:

I didnt. I did got the inspiration of the brackenwood series. But i made it all by myself.

Nice job

It was good, but not that good.
It was not the smoothest i have ever seen by far, expecially the ending got quite choppy. Did not transition well.

Your animation was quite good, looked unique and had a nice cartoony style.

The sound choice was okay, but really had nothing to it. I am not sure it fit the movie to a 'T'.

The point to it kind of escapes me... i understood the flash, but even with all its originilaity... it had no real storyline. The focus though obviously was portrayed the way you envisioned it, so i give kudos for that.

The water was green. Now of course, the water would be a bit green in a forest. Water is only the color of the light that reflects off of it, but it would not be THAT green, plus you forgot to take into consideration the color of the sky, the most important light source to water.

Overall, my only real complaint is the choppyness... much bigger videos have run perfect on my computer before... i do not see why this one couldn't. So i figure its an error on your part.

Towards the actual movie... it was good. I respect it and you as an animator. Could have been better, there are works of yours that i like more than this. Your animation was very good for you though.

There is room for imporvement, but very good job.

Good luck, mate.

NG Critic Rating
Introduction: 7.9
Impression: 8.1
Style(Graphics): 8.5
Movement: 7.5
Audio: 7.4
Emotion: 7.1
Originality: 8.5
Focus: 8.9
Personal Enjoyment: 7.9

Overall: 8.0
Rating: 4

Cheers,
K. Myst Williams

GAMECUBICLE responds:

Well. It runs choppy indeed. But thats because of the detail. i have 3ghz and it still runs choppy. Just set it to medium. Thanks for the long and good review.