nice scribbly style :)
Even as no fan of DnD i did understand this mildly, and i still even think it was good. I liked your etchy-sketchy black and white style and it suited the toon im glad you didnt use colour here, loved the fighting style here it was excellent.
Only niggles are that while the sound was good it was annoying that you just placed a soundtrack on for this, you could have made your own music or sound effects (maybe)! and the whole thing was too short, id love to see more!
Anyhow, nice work well done :)
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